Monday, August 25, 2014

Inverted Pyramid Exercise

Over summer I went to a cabin with my mother and father. We were out in the middle of the woods with all the bears, deer, and other wildlife, on the edge of Tennessee. We went for a week in July of this summer for the experience of just being out in the woods. We went in car and stayed a week. In just a small amount of time we managed to see bears, just running around in their natural habitat. A good experience, though it could be a bit scary. We also went on a wilderness hike just to see all the other animals the woods had to offer. It was beautiful although it was a bit terrifying at moments with being so close to the animals you usually see on the television screen. 

1 comment:

  1. It was a very good and interesting story that kept my attention very well. Although, I enjoyed the length of the story, it could've been longer. It was also a nice use of the inverted pyramid and your writing was very concise

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